Chapter 5: Stowaway
Chapter End! Woo! And a very fun ending, I had been waiting for this page for sooo long.
Good thing I had this weekend off to work on these backgrounds, coz they took some time to get done -.-‘
It’ll be fun to get the next chapter on the way also. See, if you remember back, with the Orca’s Past Part II, it was an abrupt 15 pages, and then we moved onto the next chapter. Well, Mana and I had decided to change up how that chapter was going to go. But the only problem was, we hadn’t written it yet. So instead of delaying the comic for it, we just cut to Chapter 5 instead.
So now, without further ado, Chapter 6 will be the… uhh, rewritten Chapter 4! I think it’s much better than what we had before, and it tells the story in a much more fluid way. It’s going to be great :).
That crab is a powerhouse! Relentless to the bitter end. Az don’t know what’s waiting for him in the bottom of the ship, all he can hear is the claws on the the floorboards… Sounds like a scary movie.
All we need now is that cued scary music! then THEN it will be a scary movie!
Somehow all I can think of upon seeing this Az is all alone then out of nowhere the Jaws theme starts to quietly play then builds up to Cameo suddenly appearing out of the shadows. Then you get the thriller flick quick 3 shot zoom with the sharp violin pitch accompanying each shot lol.
All in all can’t wait for more! Sure I’ll be anxiously awaiting to see what happens, but I understand rewrites and wanting everyone to see what you changed. I think I have rewritten a chapter intro for a story that’s been too many years in the works about a bazillion times! You just happen to reread/look back at what you had previously done and get that feeling that it’s still missing SOMETHING, and until that SOMETHING is found and filled in it’s still not finished. No matter how many chapters you rewrite/redraw, no matter how many times it has to be done until you feel that SOMETHING is finally there, I will follow thee until the bitter end :p lol
and we greatly appreciate that undying support :). It’s why we keep doing what we do.
Gotta do somethin to support my wonderful Canadian neighbors
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CRAB BAAAAAAAATTLE!
It’s like a knife fight, but with crabs. lol
I just pictured the fish guys fighting the orcas and everyone is using crab nunchucks. Hilarity ensued.
Lmao and it was brought over to this side of the woods, where i was giggling uncontrollably.